Apr. 21st, 2017

Drive-In

Apr. 21st, 2017 02:22 am
itchymoto: (OTP)
Well, here we go. My Luca/'Cready fic. D: (The first one anyway.) I'm sooo nervous to post this. 😰

"Drive-In"
8,136 words
NC-17 rating for (awkward) sex scenes

Notes:
Yeah, so...I really have a lot of problems with this and I hate it more every time I read it. XD Aside from the writing just not feeling like it's good the pacing also feels off in a few places (like it moves along too fast or some of the scenes are too short), and don't even get me started on how bad I think the porn part is. :x The duffle bag Luca carries around is supposed to represent their inventory, instead of them just being able to pull items out of thin air like in the game, and since the drive-in they go to is an actual location in the game and not something I made up I ended up not really describing it very well, either. :/

((If anyone should happen to read this please do not feel obligated to comment on it! Especially if you think it totally sucks, haha! XD))Here we go... )

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